Don't you agree, DAs' are addicting?

Question: Don't you agree, DAs' are addicting!?

Mothers Gift

Golden eyes fall
About the mothers chi
In some solemn grief
Another gift of life

This is the shortest poem I have ever written…Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Short, sweet, scintillating expression of your unique major poetic themes!. (Too many adjectives, but this poem deserves them)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Short and ever so sweet!. There is dichotomy in the third and fourth lines( grief and gift of life) that is forordained in the second, "the mother's chi"!. But my favorite line is the first, so sensitive and contemplative!. This is really very beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gaia Fife, the song of Mother Earth!. I love the mourning as a new life is brought about into the world, a little bit of grief, but the celebration of the gods as golden eyes fall for a lingering moment about the earth!. Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not for me!.

Acrostic:
a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet

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I can just hear you saying that out loud, "This is the shortest poem I have ever written," and I LOL At your hidden humor!.!.!.

You seem to be doing better with subtlties!.!.!. I love it! Thank you for writting this all for us!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

They are addicting!. I can tell you are having some fun with these!. Gaia, Mother Earth, giver of life!. Very lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

GAIA LIFE!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it, though I have never personally written a DA!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it it's short sweet and powerful!.!.nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com