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Question: Do you blame me!?
I felt left out too!.!.!.
Pharmacia
Control of every little tic
On Dramamine from Z to A
Upon this quivering little lip
Nowhere left to rendezvous
To quote the greater say, ‘adieu’
I am free from their dark spell
Nothing left, they shout, HURA
Going mad with insane moniker
-the drug world rules our lives
Yes, it is a double acrosic, if you must know!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Good for you! Jumped right in!.!.!.and did well!
How true, how true!.!.!."the drug world rules our lives"!.
Seen entirely too much of that to dispute your statement!.
Delighted you are in yet another world!.!.!.of your own choosing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is an intriguing look at the labels and medications that rampantly seem to rule lives these days!. (And a double acrostic as well, very nicely done!) I am so glad to hear that you are "free from their dark spell"!. That hints of a tale worth telling!. You have accomplished a creative and interesting double acrostic!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is really great and so true about that pharmacia'a as We cannot live them and can't live without them at times!.I have to rely on them for my life so i wish i could leave their dark spell too!.I have seen a double acrostic and it's really impressive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love the title, and your oh, so dubious, view of the world of modern medication!. This is amazing!. I'm so jealous, literally!. Next thing you know, you'll be doing rondeaus and throwing me out of that form, then haiku, then cinquain!. Soon I'll have nothing but free verse!.!.!.damn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This acrostic epidemic is spreading like the ripples in a pool - who threw the stone in!?
I won't point out that Hura should either be Hurrah, Hoorah, Hooray or Hurray!.!.!.!.!.!.just so my acrostic is better than yours!
How about - they shout 'Hosanna' insteadWww@QuestionHome@Com
Though each has their own style, I like yours most of all, from all the ones I have read today!.!.!. we need to put them all in a book and call them the DoubleCrostic Society Collection!.!.!.
As always, LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com
That's really cool!. A double acrostic!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Now I feel left out!.!.!.!.!.!.!.lol!.
I really like it!.
so true to!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I dont know what acrosic means but Im glad you dont let them control you anymore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Excellent double acrostic!. I too am glad that you are free from their dark spell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com