One for King of Biscuits... What do think?

Question: One for King of Biscuits!.!.!. What do think!?

A Fires Story

Fallen from a burning ember
Landing on the bitter crematoria
Again, they wish their lives to sing
Memories, to dance shall I
Envisioning the place I damn
Salvation of a dying King
-and his flames rage higher…

I am dedicating this to the King of Biscuits, I love his Das…Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I am humbled by this poem!. I do thank you for honoring me, and your DA is well done in the ever so Siren style that can not be duplicated!. Thank you again!. *blushes*Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am glad that you just asked to be one of my contacts!. Nice
to meet you!. I`m just a beginner but I like to answer all the
Poets!. 'LANDING ON THE BITTER CREMATORIA' Is
amazing!. My mother just died in January and I had her crem-
ated!. When I read your poem I got the chills!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, yes, double acrostics, if only I had talent with them!. I don't!. I've tried one!.!.!.it's appalling!. But this, this is beautiful!. I think you have another style to make holy (word intentional) your own!. This is amazing, and I tremble at the force of your raging flames of talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Flames raging," very neat!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. I like /acrostic very much!. Momma had a baby and its headed popped off popped off popped off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Onward to the cathedral
Mothers prayer be so
Girl you got skill

A double acrostic answer given for Siren sweet!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You did well in my opinion, but since I just did my first today, I am no expert!. I think my next project will be a nursery rhyme of something simpler!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really great and nice and i like this poem as you have said a lot in so few words!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not one of my favorites!. I think that His Toastiness may be having a bad influence!. Remember, he's just a crumb at heart!.

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I think I like it a lot!.
Your words sing!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Siren has sung well, he will be pleased!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

He managed to get us all writing double acrostics!.!.!.now to keep putting ice on my brain!.!.!.it fried!Www@QuestionHome@Com

CoolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very cool!.!.!. I do not even want to try!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com