Here's one for my good buddy. What do you think?

Question: Here's one for my good buddy!. What do you think!?

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Known Beastly
by TD Euwaite

As I am terrifying
You should run from me
I pound my chest and roar and howl
You, in fright, should flee

Can’t you see I'm horrible
Fangs and claws and things
Ghastly apparition
Death, to you, I bring

I bawl and crawl around my cage
A dark, black destiny
Don’t you know I’m dangerous
A terror to be seen

My powers are unstoppable
My web’s a steel ring
I’ll trap you in my meat locker
You’ll feel my awful sting

I shout at you from Hades
Why don’t you run in fear
Rants and raves and tantrums rise
How come you do not hear

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Putting my hand out to be slapped here but!.!.!.
I reckon if you finished the last line of the second verse with
"Death, I bring, to thee"!.!.!.it's be stronger!.
That said, it's my only constructively critical comment!.
It's typically well written!. Well done!.
also, I applaud your wisdom and patience last night sir!.
That was a disgraceful diatribe, unfairly leveled!.
And if the trip to KC is planned by a certain individual, a certain piece from "Oklahoma" comes to mind!.!.!.
"I got to Kansas City on a Friday!.!.!.
By Saturday, I'd learnt a thing or two!.!.!."!.!.!.!
(",)

D!.!.!.

PS!. Must get to O'Dowds for a pint or 8 one of these fine days!.!.!. Hopefully I'll be gigging over your side this time 2009!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And what a foul tantrum that was too!. I think it is a great poem in response to the attack you took last night!. I was shocked and dismayed to say the least!. I like the line "My powers are unstoppable, My web's a steel ring"!. I think it's a very elegant way to say!.!.!.'Really, you don't want to mess with me'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This inner beast of yours is ferocious and frightening!. I would be quaking if this was directed at me!. This is a sound response, however, under the dismaying circumstances!. Under any circumstances, it's a great poem with vividly visual imagery!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was brilliant TD!.!.!.!.!.!.and all the while I was going through this, you were holding me in a spell with firm arms and pointed claws!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and the greatness of your poetry is that it continues to do so even after i leave for another one!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is this your alta ego!? I wouldn't want to meet you on a dark night!. Dr!. Jekyll and Mr!. Hyde, hm!? So, now we want the one with goody-two-shoes in it as a balance!.

Nothing to alter, it's fine as it is (thank goodness)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really love this poem!. It`s so ''VIBRANT''!. And full of
''ELECTRICITY''!. I absolutely love the verse,
''I BRAWL AND CRAWL AROUND MY CAGE'' Great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Magnificent poem!. I would be afraid, but you are the master of many things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The walls of hades shake when you growl!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am not scared of poetry!.

EDIT: No, TD, I think he is one of those virtual people!. You see what I mean!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tis a master class given!. I chuckle mightily!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you got picked on in Gym class, huh!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I missed all the beauties of yesterday due to this stupid machine!.!.!.!.!.It appears you are still on a roll!
I love them all!

PS!. Don't we all feel that inner beast at times!?Www@QuestionHome@Com