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"drifting"
Just a ragamuffin,
always seemed to rain!.
Every drop i cried,
innocecnce still died!.
It once was so clear,
no reason left for sin!.
Dreams i seem to set side,
corrupt immpurity!.
I was just a mystery,
So deep down inside,
love and hate, feel the sane,'
nothing to explain!.
Forget those awful years,
Hellish memories!.
I think and still I wonder,
whats become of me!.
You screwed me over nicely,
terror in my heart!.
Never ending hunger,
The eternal flame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is what I look like!. Ugly, huh!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
The dichotomy of jaded innocense makes this very intriguing and moving!. The words present a vivid picture of the hungry, terrorized "ragamuffin" that goes straight to my heart!. Wonderful writing from the endless rain to the "eternal flame"!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh yeah, For some reason I love the verse,'LOVE AND HATE FEEL THE SAME' I totally believe in that!. I have
felt both sides and sometimes you can`t tell the difference!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I like it!.
Deep feeling in it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
You did good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com