From the West
he came
A bandit
with a smile
that paralyzes
and corrupts
A bandit
with lyrics
that hypnotize
and erupts
A bandit
showing paths
that actualize
but interrupts
a woman
full of lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com
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he came A bandit with a smile that paralyzes and corrupts A bandit with lyrics that hypnotize and erupts A bandit showing paths that actualize but interrupts a woman full of lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Marguerite this is HOT!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com when i get up i dont know if im truly awake or if im still dreaming its son easy for me to die in love with a woman born in my heart in my head, in my soul!. i wish it wouldnt be so complicated to forgive so i could live inside all tears form my dreams forget about the darkness inside yourself, for what you cannot get theres no one else to bleme you are not the only one everybody needs some body and i want somebody i want somebody to loveWww@QuestionHome@Com This is too perfect not to yoink!.!.!.!. The Butt Pirate ~~~~~~~ From West Hollywood he came A rump ranger with chaps of leather and ventilated crotch A queen of the strip in full makeup how much is too much!? A winker milk drinker a packer of fudge A woman with fake boobiesWww@QuestionHome@Com Wow, now I'm craving bandit for breakfast!.!.!.this is an amazing poem with a succinct style that goes straight for the throat!.!.!.and holds on!. In a strictly good way of course!. Loved it, loved it, loved it!. Now I need a home on the range!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it's soft, sweet and simple!.!.!.!.!.!.and i like it very much!.!.!.the rhymes 'corrupts, erupts and interrupts' makes it more musical and beautiful!.!.!.very well done indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com This saga needs continuance for the woman, full of life, must surely want revenge on this evil bandit from the west! Very unique and very descriptive!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it, could be a cool song :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I really do!.!.!.that bandit was someone who interrupted my life!.!.!.I know him, lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is so nice Without a device!. I am just a man without a plan!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I enjoyed it but the woman seems out of place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it! You compose just as good as you are!. Thanks for sharing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com ???it Who wrote it!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com It is very good!. Just be careful of virtual cowboys!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very well done, Marguerite! I enjoyed reading this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com me likey!!! jk lol i do like it!.!.!. its sort of got a dark air about it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm the Gangster of Love!.!.!.!.LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com |