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Question: Hey check out my poem!?
thought i'd try something different!.!.!.!.!.!.
I fought through hell
I fought through fire
I fought for years
and did not tire
And now at last
i've made it back
to claim the things
in life i lack!.
Alas the street
i used to know
is boarded up
and sunk in snow
The house that once
was my domain,
a tattered symbol
of my pain!.
It took me years
to track you down
a thousand names
a thousand towns
and here at last
i find you wed
a daughter, son,
and dog named Ned
I left you once
to shield your eyes
and save you from
their pain and lies
and now my gun
my only friend!.
it seems a fitting
way to end
War has stole
away my wife
and now at last
it claims my lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
PLEASE PUBLISH A BOOK!!!!!!!!!
THEY ARE VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!
GO COME UP WITH MORE SO THERE ARE ENOUGH TO PUBLISH A BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but please tell us the name of the book if you are going to publish one!
i want one so badly!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
goood, really good
actually it would make not only a good poem but also a grrreat song!.
i love it
good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com
Awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow, couldn't believe you wrote this!. actually i could!. thinking of publishing your poetry!. you already got one fan me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
awesome!.!. this is refreshing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
impressive!.
slightly confusing for me,
bu i am not the best reader!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow! So sad, but an awesome poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
shivers ran down me! great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
boy , excellent !.!.!.!.!.!.!.
cool man!.!. now i think i should write a poem to appreciate you!Www@QuestionHome@Com