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Question: I offer my hand!.!.!.will you take it!?
THE INVITATION

This is the time,
are you ready!?
Keep your secrets unsafe,
even though you need them!.

Make this the greatest thing
you have undertaken!.

Hope is fleeting but eternal,
a moment will confirm that!.
Never stop believing that
divinity can return to its birthplace!.!.!.you!.

Although the path is dark and
nefarious evil plots its plans,
despair is not our guiding star!.

Die for another lifetime,
abandon inhibition,
never let time tell you that it's over!.
Caress the moment, become as you always were---
eternal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Of course I will take your hand and it will steady me through this soul-shaking poem!. It is very powerful in its perspective and has a wonderful beauty of words!. I really love the last stanza for what it says and for how it makes me feel!. It makes me feel comfortable with the inevitable and cognizant of the moment!. For this, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a great offer, wonderfully expressed with several paradoxes, which reveal something about the nature of human relationships!. I can't help feeling that we are already holding one an-others hands cybernetically, aesthetically, and spiritually!. But I do appreciate the formal invitation!.
An afterthought - Let's all hold hands!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have just finished answering your other poem and I asked that you show me something different!.!.!. I don't apologize but i do, in a way, take it back!.!.!. THIS is what I wanted! This is the exploration I hoped you would seek!.!.!. Thank you for this and just know that you are always, my immortal!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

invitations are allowed considerating!.
so the whole internet will probably be awhile!.!.!.lol
no really, i think it says come be yourself with me, and
thats just as special as getting asked over to a friends house whos grandma made a pie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yesterday I thought
Everything had died!. Your
Song made the difference!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll grasp your hand that's offered here,
And hold it tight to keep you near!.
I'll hold it through eternity,
Thank you, my dear, for helping me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poems always have a mysterious undertone, but I will take your hand and follow wherever you lead!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am stuck in the 'fleeting/eternal' vortex!. I can't decide if I understand it, but I keep going over it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I return with both hands outstretched!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that question's been answered long ago!. good stuff!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I will take itWww@QuestionHome@Com

I dont understand the question
But i will take it !!?Www@QuestionHome@Com