Will you comment on or critique this poem please?

Question: Will you comment on or critique this poem please!?

THE TWIST

Slow down
the rapid pulse
to hear what
I say!.

Let us hope
that words,
this time,
can achieve feeling!.

I pray that you
will see
the error
of my ways

and perchance!.!.!.
go your own!?
For my hand
is a trickster's,

one on the
rose stem,
the other
on the trigger!.

So which is it,
do I offer
love
or mortality!.

Either way
you will receive
both from
a worthier hand

than mine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Their are so many layers, ambiguities, paradoxes, ironies, enigmas* and innuendos* that I doubt that even you understand this completely!. I read it six times, each one revealed something new!.

*Regarding enigmas, is it this one that goes innuendo the other one!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Guns and Roses!.!.!. something that, oddly, describes you!. If nothing else, you know how to explain your own psyche!.!.!. But you are able to do far more!. This is nice, pleas don't be hurt by this but!.!.!. try something new! I want to see how broad your spectrum can be!.!.!.

I!. Love!. You!. Still!.

Blessed BeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like, but you throw me with your twist!. Perhaps you do indeed mean so!. "A worthier hand than mine"!? Judgment day!? Puzzled I will ponder which for the poet is usually good!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You desire
another hand
to take that
of the one
that you love!.

You fear
your love
brings pain,
but that is
because
you have never tried!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

with nothing to lose, this threat wont be heard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its okay but i think you have more then one thing going on, bit confusingWww@QuestionHome@Com

This one is three of four really cool things!.!.!.rife with innuendo!.!.!.my favorite desert!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com