Will you comment on or critique this please?

Question: Will you comment on or critique this please!?

WELCOME MAT

The door
closes;

hearth fire
burns low!.

Moon shines
above,

the night
will sing

and I
will sleep

in the
knowledge!.

Home is
not where

the heart
will rest!.

Home is
the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like!. Do you think you can cut any more words out!? lol 4 beats per square!.!.!.that is a new cadence!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes it is!.
wherever you are!.
whereever you go!.
no matter what you say!.
notice the moon is always at home
to remind you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Their ar two menny wurds end thay doant ryhme!. Allsew, yew putt allot uf spays beetwen the lions!. It tuk me a lawn thyme too reed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Easy simple read!. Cute simple pantameter!. Like a little rhyme with my poetry but otherwise very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting thought and beautifully stated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

extraordinarily fine writing!.!.!.very thought provoking, thanks for sharing:)*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sharp and strong, this hits with a quickness that stirs the soul to acknowledge something it has always known!.!.!. the sign of a true poet!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderfully said in a clear and precise pen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
I really like your style!.
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Home is indeed in the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Niceeee !.!.!.!.!.!.i likey!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Short and sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. I think that's really good!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

See!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com