Could you check this out and comment??

Question: Could you check this out and comment!?!?

its not a poem but its sad and good!.!.!.im sure you wont think its horrible

http://storywrite!.com/story/163658Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's lyrical, very sweet!. You shall get more better while you practice and it's the best place to air your views on this little piece!. No complaints from me because I don't know much about short story writng!. I like it; it's a weiner!. Uh-oh a winner!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was fantastic !.Your words the story wow!.!. i loved every word and it made me smile the love these 2 had!. keep writing as your a real 19!.!. take careWww@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it and cool websites, I'll check it out later!

I'm so addicted to the sound of your voice!.!.!.!.

I just love that line!.

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try to write short stories or emotional blogs!.warm and nice images are available in your writing!.i wish you good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's pretty good!. I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com