| Question Home |
Position:Home>Poetry> Rate my poem thats NOT about love =)?Question: Rate my poem thats NOT about love =)!? Ode
Ode to death An awful pain Ode to death All for fame!? Ode to death Such a sin Ode to death How can you win!? Ode to the doomed Who shall life for them end Ode to the doomed Who soon will be dead Ode to the doomed Who can’t decide Ode to the doomed Who turn to suicide toodles =) plz rateWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: To tell you the truth, as I began to read your poem, I thought, "Uh-huh!.!.!.!."!. It seemed trite and rather elementary-school!. I was pleasantly surprised, however, by the way your poem built, almost like a piece of music slowly becoming more dynamic!. By the end, I was very impressed by how you had taken a few words with a simple rhyme scheme, and had caught my attention!. Very well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a really touching poem!. it reminds me of To write love on her arms!. i don't know why anyone would think this poem is about love!. You should read this to someone!. this really brings out the message of suicide, and i think it a great way to express feelings about the issue!. Very well done!. Not to be so literary, but i love the repetition of ode to the doomed and ode to death!. it really sinks the mood of the poem in!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem is really great! As a matter of fact, we have this poem book we have to create a poem that is called Ode; although you have an awesome poem I would never take something that is not my own!. Sincerely, iDNARBWww@QuestionHome@Com Hmm!.!.!.the intricacies of death!.!.!.a la suicide!. I had a friend who committed suicide, I still wonder why!.!.!.why choose death!? Concise and to the point this ode is, as death is our friend, we all meet it in the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com really like it!.!. relates to alot in lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com |