A poen I wrote for my Dad......do you like it?

Question: A poen I wrote for my Dad!.!.!.!.!.!.do you like it!?

here is a poem i wrote for my dad!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

TO MY DEAREST DAD

The day has dissolved into night
And clouds are darker grown
As usual with my words all weak,
Dear dad I'm left alone

How often had I longed to write
One sweet and perfect rhyme
While by the window sill I sat
And wasted all my time

And when I took my pen and tried
Whenever I tried oh dad
I fell too short and ended up
With verses that are bad

They have no fairy tales to tell
Or goblins caught within
I wrought them with no magic spell
Great honour's rose to win

Yet ere these moments fly away
And moon shall further move
Her crescent boat, I'll write a line
Thy gentle heart to prove

"A million daddies make the world
A million you could see
But round and round the seas and lands
O there is none like thee

A billion fathers are on earth
A billion you could find
But there is none in all my world
So loving, sweet and kind"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I wish I could click the star and give you a thousand for that poem!. I am sure the majority would concur with your words about your father!. I certainly do!. Write on, Jay, your Dad is proud to call you Son!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, you are a poet!. Think of writing as a career!. You must be very creative!. I really love the line,
"They have no fairy tales to tell
Or goblins caught within
I wrought them with no magic spell
Great honour's rose to win"
That, my friend, is magic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is also sweet
doing a poem for you dad!.
it talks about your life with him
and this one is like remembering you
father!.
I can see you put alot of effort in
writing this poem
You did an awesome job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your words are never weak, your verses never bad,
This poem is a marvel, written for your dad,
In beauty you have shown us your father's priceless worth,
We see this gentle, loving man, the best dad on this Earth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like that!!! At first I thought it was going to be sad but then it turned out good!. The rhythm is good and so is the rhyming!. KUDOS for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's absolutely fantastic, and it paints a great picture!.
Your dad will love this :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

absolutely wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Finally someone has penned an ode to great dads! Excellent work! I'm sure your dad is proud!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I like your poen:) Silver!. You write lovely poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is very good to feel grateful for your dadyWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.you've got some talent thereWww@QuestionHome@Com