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Question: An Acrostic Saturday Poem!?
Saturday

Soaring parallel to euphoria,
Assembling a motive for expression!.
Taking hold of a wishful thought,
Uttering my sound appreciation for daydreams!.
Reaching for your aura,
Desiring to feel the warmth of it's shade!.
Awaiting our dance in the clouds,
Yielding only to Your Will!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
“Saturday”

Searching
And never finding,
That place that I once knew,
Underneath the velvet sky,
Remnants of you!.
Distant memories
Are all that I have left of our
Yesterdays!.!.!.


Temari

Semper Fi - Thank you for the inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There are some with no appreciation for subtleties, or the work it takes to create a form in lack of form!. This is a beautiful poem of surrender, to God, to Nature, to a Lover, it is left completely up to the decision of the reader, part of what makes it so beautiful!. I applaud you, my friend!. And I now go to assemble a motive for expression!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am happy it is Saturday

How unfortunate I must work
Anyways, this was a nice dedication
Very very nice indeed
Even though, I'm at work

Thankful for my job!?
Of course I am

Working nowadays isn't easy
On top of that, a good job is hard to find
Really though, I'd much rather be home
Kind of you to note Saturday though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Seams like yesterday when i dreamed of you
U where alone singing a dark song since years
Not a single ray of light to lead your steps through your fears
Day after day i lighted a candle to break the darkness to blue
At last the sun shined but you were gone with the wind
You took a plan to nightland and thats where your light endWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome!! I don't have any other words!.!.!.
For some reason you are able to touch each moment of my life with Blessings and honesty!.!.
I was just about to tell someone where to go!.!.!.with their "honesty & Kindness", as my Son was deeply hurt & confused by words I'm sure weren't meant!.!.!.!.!.
God Bless and Good Night!Www@QuestionHome@Com

So I guess your Saturday is going well!? This poem, acrostic, certainly is a great start! "Assembling a motive for expression", leaves room for a lot of interpretations which is good!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just can't resist reading one of your poems, every time i see one posted, i have to read it right away, because i know that it will be amazing, soul stirring, delightful, and beautiful!.!.!.!.!.you are the number one poet!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very well done!.!.!.!.!.an acrostic for Saturday!.!.!.!.!.i loved it!.!.!.and what about acrostics for all the days of the weak!? just try and you could make a wonderful series!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it Semper it was really nice as is all your poetry!.I alwayss enjoyed reading your poems as there alway fun ' full of hope and just down right great,,,Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful poem!. It could be used as a prayer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've seen worse, but I prefer rhyme in my verse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with the person above meWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like the part of His will!.!.poems do not have to rhymeWww@QuestionHome@Com

S till serving the Lord
A lways following Him
T urning away
U ntil nothing but Him
R emains with in
D aily giving Him my Life
A t His feet one day
Y ou'll see all our crownsWww@QuestionHome@Com

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