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Descent into Seconds
What is this life, and what is this world, who is God, why are we here, should there be a life and a death of a soul!?
The answers are so opaque that we cannot possibly entoil
These, the sorrows we sing for
as the receding seconds
the severances of the systems of the world
the fragmented, escaping into us
as they light the lie
So thoughtless is the clarity
the love of all in this insanity
of life in a system
as the other one
in satyr
Theater figures of thesaurus worlds
An astounding illogical
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From the illuminating title to the final line, this is an esoteric and meaningful piece of writing!. The last stanza is quite provocative, kind of a haunting look at reality/insanity!. I really think I am beginning to understand this and truly appreciate it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are so like my friends and I, we are always debating the answers to these questions and ofcourse we never arrive at an answer but we just enjoy the debate!. And it really touched me because today my dad and I were just having a philosophical debate and I was just so furious and exhausted and you just made me smile!. So thank you and by the way!.!.!.do you mind if I can show this poem to some of my friends!.
!.!.!.!.You really do have a poetic heart or atleast that's what this makes me feel like!.
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ABSOLUTELY AWSOMEWww@QuestionHome@Com
very pink floyd!Www@QuestionHome@Com
it is an AWESOME and a WONDERFUL poem !!!!! i liked it so muchWww@QuestionHome@Com
Fantastic! Great! Wonderful! Beautiful! & what more!. Ur thought matches with mine!. The last stanza of this poetry makes a reader to plunge in between the lines!. Thnks for sharing~Www@QuestionHome@Com