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Question: Do you have to go to school today!?
Mum, I really can't go to school today
I must be sick in every way
My head is burning, glowing green at night
I see dead people, gives me freight
I puked this morning and the day before
Pneumonia or appendicitis, must be, for sure
I even looked it up on the World Wide Web
My tummy aches on right, typical of that
I try to move but I can't feel my legs
I wanted to run when I saw you having!.!.!.
Anyways, I hope you see the pain I'm in
This headache I have, bashing within
The wind must have moved, I can't move my face
A try to smile, but I can't, what a disgrace
I must have broke my toes, they are deep red
What's that!? What's that, what have you said!?
Today is Saturday!?
Bye, Bye! I'm going out to playWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A nice refreshing look!. Some word choices hurt you on meter!. Reread out loud to spot!. A line for example, maybe too many syllables: "Pneumonia or appendicitis, must be, for sure!." Typos too like fright instead of your "freight"!. This is a keeper, spend some time to tune it!. Hopefully it is different enough to be considered original from Silverstein's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This illness hits each and every generation, delightful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds alot like Shel SilversteinWww@QuestionHome@Com

thats what i thought!.!.!.!.although it does remind me of Calvin and
Hobbes!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com