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Question: I need help with this poem!.!?
For my English class we need to respond to another classmates poem!. I was lucky enough to get my crushe's poem!. Here is it!.!.!.
Where is the sun!?
the glorious rays!?
i dont want those clouds,
i dont need the thinder and lightning
spewing from the heavens!.
i can see the shade
engulfing the sun
and i'm ready
to push it all away
so your shining rays
can brighten me
once again
Ok now i dont know how to go about writing a response i want to make it cute since he knows i like him but i just need something to get a jumpstart on this!. Any help will work!. thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I am your sun and my arms
are my glorious rays!.
There will be no thunder,
no dark clouded days!.
The heavens will be calm,
no lightnings will hinder!.
My loving warmth to you
I bestow, for I am the giver!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your sun will return
along with the rays
The clouds will disappear
bringing happier days
sent from the heavens
I am your light
And i will be here for you
though this night
so pull away your curtains
and greet the day
and you will see the sun shine
coming your wayWww@QuestionHome@Com