This poetry?

Question: This poetry!?

when the wind blows
it smells quite fine
until i discover it came out of yours, and not mine

the foul smell into my nose
so smelly it drifts into my clothes

(fart)

i have spent a whole year without you
back then, i couldnt see how i could
now all you are to me is a rusty peice of wood

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You'r funny!. Take out the third stanza, it's not needed!. End the third line with "yours," then begin a fourth line with "and!." That way you highlight the near rhyme of "blows" and "yours!." One more thing, you better not be an all grown up type of person, cuz this is a kid's poem!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com