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Question: Hows this poem!? What should i call it!?
I'm thinking maybe calling it "dont be surprised" but tell me if you have any better ideas
For years you pull and taunt
At a thick elastic band
Figure you can stretch it all you want
It’ll never take a stand
Well they don’t last forever
They eventually wear out
And though you feel clever
You will soon be without
The friend you took for granted
The only one you’ve known
You never thought she mattered
But let’s see how you do on your own
You can’t expect the band
To forever take this pettiness
It can’t always withstand
The anger you’ve had it suppressed
So don’t you be surprised
When this band finally snaps
You ignored all its cries
And never figured that perhaps
Not everything’s about you
You’re not the only one here
And this elastic is through
With feeling it might as well disappearWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's pretty good
I can relate to it really well :)!.
I think you should call it!.!.!.!.!.!.
well dont be surprised is a good one but i like!.!.!.!.
What goes aroudn comes around
or
As this elastic snapsWww@QuestionHome@Com
"Stay Calm" might be a good title or I'd go with your title!.
It sounds quite good!. I found it interesting how you metaphorically speak of an elastic band and a friendship [if I got the right meaning of you're poem!.]Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would name it "Things fall apart"!. :P
I loved the poem, it was very good! I hope you write more, looking forward to it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's really good!. I've always wanted to be a good writer at poetry!. How long did it take to write this!?
How about "Over Time"Www@QuestionHome@Com
good poem
good title
good messageWww@QuestionHome@Com
Your title is perfect for this piece!. Love the poem!.
Very nice indeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yea i agree with dat name tooWww@QuestionHome@Com