Back to a little darkness. Hope u like it.?

Question: Back to a little darkness!. Hope u like it!.!?

"knees"

Going for a ride,
hope I don't come back!.
Numbed with drugs and lies,
I can simply finally die!.

Walk with me, the other side,
show you what life's about!.
The rush i get from death,
just eggs me on to die!.

As I try to drag you,
down into my dirt!.
Why is life worth living,
through suffering and pain!.

You can run and run,
you'll never reach your goal!.
Everybody's dream must die,
you're on your knees again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think this is very nice, even for a "dark" poem!. It is worded as an invitation, but it is really more of a hidden plea for the other person not to go along!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you faced defeat too many times!. And you have come to realize the folly of existance!. And you are educating your pupil on a sad lesson of life!.
It's coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's pretty good but 'i can simply finally die' sounds odd!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
I love your wording in this one!.
I think you described me in the last stanza!.!.!.!.!.lol!.
Very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

"As I try to drag you,down into my dirt" Ah,Revenge so sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com