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Question: One more , then a break!. How is this one!.!?
"me"


Hard to find,
the real me!.
Italian is the
trunk of my tree!.
Many different
bloodlines!.
So many hide
in me!.
Irish, French,
Indian,Dutch!.
Trying to pin
it down,
is just way
too much!.
Many bloods flow
through me!.
From Spain to
Africa!.
I may not
look like you,
I'm your brother,
rest assured!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
you were not so hard to find for me,,,
i recognized a pattern in the rings of your tree
zooming in from magnetic north and scanning by the tropics
my clairvoyant wireless device captured you with fiber optics
the signature that you transmit burst into my frequency
i'd know you anywhere dark prince
i don't need a search engine to see
my space will always sponsor your link
i really don't care what visitors think
i like your preferences, add-ons, tags and themes
i like to stumble upon you in dreams
remember- though i may be hard to catch online
my cerulean eyes watch you surf all the time!.
there is no one else so sincere to IM
i shout out with pride "steve bathory is my 4ever friend"
to you my blackest secrets are safe to tell
sign in to my astral site; enjoy the content! (lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Too bad that the poem did not end with "And I am an American"!. Nobody states the place they were born - in the country that has no name - the good old USA!. Instead they call themselves after the place that their parents were born - like "I am Italian"!. I AM YOUR BROTHER because we are AMERICANS !?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Austria, Russia, and Romania,
My family tree should entertain ya!.
Spain and France and Alemania,
Such a mix could not be zanier!.
Through it all, our faith stayed true,
I'm proud to say that I'm a Jew!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You're on a roll tonight, my friend!. This is very good!. I like the break neck speed, as the other poster said, also!. I especially like how it ends - that 'I'm your brother' - nevertheless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You messed up on "Many different bloodlines"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i personally don't enjoy poems written like this, it is hard to get into it because it doesnt flow well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most people won`t admit it, but we are all related!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed this poem it was actually very nice!!
I give it a 8 out of 10!!


Keep up the great poems!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the fast pace of the poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

so take me as i am
isnt that all we can
isnt thats God planWww@QuestionHome@Com

not badWww@QuestionHome@Com