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Question: Last one!.!.!.i'm gonna be busy!. hehehe How is this!.!?
"fallen"


If music is
a mirror!.
Revealing
depths of
my heart!.
Then I will
write,
The darkest
song of all!.
For without
forgiveness,
My soul
forever lost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love the last line!. For without forgiveness
My soul forever lost!.
Just hits me hard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good, I liked!.!.!.!.!.congratulations, write more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hello,
wow, wow, wow, wow
I like this new dimension you are into - oh no, I like just your new stileWww@QuestionHome@Com

Funny - that no one thought this one was DEPRESSING!. Man - if you need forgiveness - then go GET IT!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow Dude you are spitting the rhymes on down to the bone today ' and i love it so,,, Real nice!.,Www@QuestionHome@Com

Short, sweet and too the point!. This is a nice piece of work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one, I think a lot of ppl can relate to this!. It has truth in it, I think!.!.!.I like the title, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoah!.
i love it!
:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, we must forgive!. But such a hard task it is!.!.!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com