"fallen"
If music is
a mirror!.
Revealing
depths of
my heart!.
Then I will
write,
The darkest
song of all!.
For without
forgiveness,
My soul
forever lost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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If music is a mirror!. Revealing depths of my heart!. Then I will write, The darkest song of all!. For without forgiveness, My soul forever lost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love the last line!. For without forgiveness My soul forever lost!. Just hits me hard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very good, I liked!.!.!.!.!.congratulations, write more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hello, wow, wow, wow, wow I like this new dimension you are into - oh no, I like just your new stileWww@QuestionHome@Com Funny - that no one thought this one was DEPRESSING!. Man - if you need forgiveness - then go GET IT!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow Dude you are spitting the rhymes on down to the bone today ' and i love it so,,, Real nice!.,Www@QuestionHome@Com Short, sweet and too the point!. This is a nice piece of work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this one, I think a lot of ppl can relate to this!. It has truth in it, I think!.!.!.I like the title, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com whoah!. i love it! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, we must forgive!. But such a hard task it is!.!.!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |