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Question: I think you will like this!?
Yesterday this resilient fringe of woods
Were resplendent as a burning wild fire!.

I walk and walk, nonchalant and brave
In this deserted trail, like a forlorn child

The ashes hover in the late dusky sky
As the charred remains of branches raise

The singeying leaves turn a lost breeze
To a saddening string of musical sounds

I carry along a canvas where
Beautiful memories of you belong

The blissful joys innocence brings
The delight from which warm tears spring

And like little dimples on scorched dry sand
By the first few drops from the rains in June

It quenches my torment for love in the remains
Of a delightful desperation of pining heartWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow! Impressive! I really like it!.!.!.well done!.!.!.maybe you should write more and then like make a book!. !! lol just a suggestion!! good job cyaWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked it yehh =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

As usual, AWESOME!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is amazingWww@QuestionHome@Com

You think right,
I do like it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com