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Question: My poem ' Am I vain or insecure!?' what do you think!?!?
Here it is; What do you think!?!?

Am I vain or insecure!?

To the limit I push you
Forcing the sweat to pour
Forcing my limbs to ache
Thoughts keeping me going
Striving to perfect
My insecurities; never before
Have I felt this way!

My heart grew, creating
My skin to stretch
To a size I never felt before I
found real love
The weight has all shed
Except for 4 pounds
… Soon this will be gone!

Toning up
Pushing my self further
Back to my pre – life
Days;
Maybe im vain!
I’ve always been slim
Having my baby
brought out my
body worries!.

Even writing my poem
I feel I need to explain
to you …!. For my own self
reassurance!.
That I am a slim girl
…!. A UK size 8
But I need my flat
Stomach back
to feel like me for summer
And this I will achieve
I will look better than before!.

- Kirsty MapesWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not vain at all!.
You just want back your tummy how it was!.
I did the same thing and I'm a size 4!.
You'll get it back!.
Good luck!
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey from brooklyn Ny!. You dont sound vain or insecure!. you sound determined and gave your motives!. You will succeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

neither in way, you merely want to be yourself, & with child in hand, not without,

keep writing,?
!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com