A Simple Love Poem - Do You Like?

Question: A Simple Love Poem - Do You Like!?

In my purse
there is a
picture
of you

Safely placed
in a niche
near the keys

Quietly
secretly
I view it
day and night

Can a heart
beat faster
than love's pace

In my purse
you remain
until then !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes, I hear you!. "Until then!.!.!." hang in there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely Poem
Keeping a picture in the purse
is one way to remember
that special someone you love
The special someone you love
would make a persons heart beat faster
Keep the picture where its safe
don't let the keys scratch itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Now I have to rethink the picture that I keep in my purse, in a secret place, close to the keys!. This is absolutely beautiful!. A woman's purse is her world, if someone is allowed into the purse, what a special person they must be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's really lovely, I think that the best love poems are ones that focus on little things - in the case of this poem, that would be keeping a picture in your purse of your loved one!. Very sweet without being corny, I liked it a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whomever you await is lucky to be the recipient of a love (poem) so pure and beautiful in its simplicity!. I love the lines
Can a heart
beat faster
than love's pace
Lovely, touching poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

soft and easy, not over-stated!. I think the line "day and night" is unnecessary, the extra line (as opposed to the other stanzas) causes a stumble, at least for me!. Otherwise, I like this, sweet simplicity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like, but have 1 suggestion based on my stupid mind!.

Safely placed
in a niche
near the keys

Can't get over my nice picture being scratched by the keys!. I would change that to something else!. Good poem though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now, THAT'S a poem to like! Not one word wasted, or line, simple, but completely viewable images!.!.!.and the meaning is clear!.!.!.!.no complications to wade through!.!.!.!.KUDOS!!!
Keep it up!.!.!.and keep more coming!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Marguerite,

I like and indeed you deserve your honor badge considering your great contributions in poetry!. Wear it with your best!. Keep up your good contributions!. You are an inspiration to many!.

God Bless!

Third PWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hey that's actually pretty good! Keep up the good work! I just love poetry!. !. !. !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's a nice touch to the ending lol I like poems too, just not as much as you do! Poetry is awesome though =) it expresses feelings!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You paint a pretty picture!. I can see It safely placed in the niche near the keys!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Boy, with those words I would not mind being the one on your keychain! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love this poem so easy to read and understand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good!. I thought it would have more words, but I still liked it a lot!. great job!. keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE THIS PEOM YOUR A RELLY GOOD POET KEEP ON WRITEING!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I like it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

good one!.!.!.!.
better if instead of purse, if that'd be 'heart'!.!.!.
(dont knw if that would make some sense!?!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com