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Question: How can I improve this avoidance poem!?
Yahoo is a void

I need to avoid
asking if you like
my poem!.

Or the Y powers
will delete me for
solicitation!.

I was waiting
for Dateline NBC
to come after me!.

But now I know
asking for your opinion
is "solicitation!."

So, from now on
I will ask you all
to help me improve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes it is a pain
And I hate it when my poems get deleted I
Have a problem
Obviously yahoo doesn't care
Oh well, I guess it's our loss

So why should I continue posting
Unfortunately, I rarely write my stuff down
Creating a void in my life and I don't
Know how I'm supposed to get it back
Sorry Elaine, I've not been much helpWww@QuestionHome@Com

Solicitation of what or whom Is what I want to know!. Do you think they would tell you If you are trying to solicit votes or are you trying to solicit minors!. There is a big difference!. You could be put In jail for one of those!. Come on ,Elaine P Is
a published poet,not a child stalker!. And I will vouch for her!.
You people In their need to wake up and smell the 'DELETE
BUTTON'!. YOU ARE GOING AFTER THE WRONG PEOPLE!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

EXCELLENT! I'd make one change!. In the second stanza, you used the letter Y !.!.!. change that to Yahoo! complete with the exclamation point so EVERYONE can 'get the idea' !.!.!. and this poem doesn't need any OTHER improvement, and I'll give you an A+ for your poetry and your wonderful sense of humor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice and to the point :) That ought to help!. I have to comment though!. Y!A poetry is mild compared to Y!A garden and landscape!. People will report you there for the most minor infraction which is one of the reasons I rarely answer questions there anymore!. Makes me kinda sad too as I've slipped from 2nd to 3rd in the top 10 and I just lost my TC badge :( Oh well, I like poetry better and the people in this section are great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There's an easy way out,
if you email me about!.

My rhymes spit glue
like a camel with flu!.


They may leave you sad
because you'll have more issues
than Puffs' has tissues!.
After your Dateline arrest
nobody is going to miss you
they all knew
this poem's overdue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am going to have to be so inventive - because most of my poems are posted to see if you like them!. Could the brainy ones amongst us come up with an innocuous phrase which will slip past the scrutiny of the guards!.
We need a word or phrase they've never heard of - but which we all know the meaning of!.

Ap pasand hai!? (I think that says You like!? in Urdu!!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved the line: "delete me for solicitation!." Just think of your defense in front of a judge!. "Your honor, what can I say!? I got deleted for!.!.!.solicitation!" Now what do you think Judge Judy would say!? Want my "opinion!." Thought so, I will leave now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Jimmenie, that is hard to believe, but it all depends on if you are a man or woman, I have learned!. I get the boot for asking the same question as a male, and their question is accepted and responded to!. Tell you what!.!.I am sick of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have argued this point with Yahoo! before!. In the end, they usually find the "chatting" in the answers and comments!. I have had three violations reversed!. Minor victories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't think you CAN improve on something this great! :o)))Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ha!.!. hahahahahahaha!. That was pretty funny!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Writing is improving!. You forgot chatting!. One of my specialties!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I find it ridiculous that you can not even ask for critique!.!.!.isn't that why most poets post their poems!?

Oops, I asked a question in an answer!. Oh well!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now, who's a clever girl then!?

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

End it now!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is borin!. Sorry but its too!.!.!. borinWww@QuestionHome@Com

and thats the end of that chapterWww@QuestionHome@Com