Please tell me if you like this poem?

Question: Please tell me if you like this poem!?

The hardest part of blindness
is losing sight of what's been left behind!.
And terrified as the open darkness wraps
around my mind's eye
like the fog and mist settling on the windows
of a passing train
I make a choice!.
Do I walk into the unknown
without concern
or turn back to see myself
as truly I was
one more time
And try to remember just enough
to chain me to the new, terrible darkness
or set me free!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Another great one umokay! Last song was amazing try to get these publised dude!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sure you're not used to criticism, but sorry dude you'll have to get used to it because in the real world not everyone is all Nice and prissy, which is what you are probably used to!. I like it but it's a little to dry to my taste, although you have a good start!. I would suggest you keep working on it!. Try to get a little deeper, get into the real emotions and the magic will begin!. It is not until then that you begin to realize that words were deep down inside that you never knew you had!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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that was good beyond words!!!!! omg that was one of the best poems ive ever read!. omg that was beautiful and true to the heart!. it really makes you thinkWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's interesting; gives something to think about!. Pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love your poem made me cry you should get it published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this will relate well with blind peopleWww@QuestionHome@Com