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Question: May I offer you a poem, Mademoiselle!?
Morning Glory
Alone stirring in my despair,
Restless fears would never cease!.
Pining for hope, which seemed so rare,
You uprooted me with peace!.
Softly like snow-on-the-mountain,
Airy like love-in-a-mist,
You gently nurtured me with care
Like petals by dawn's light kiss'd!.
The glow of your skin, carnation-
A Venus, your looks entice-
Cute as a black-eyed susan-
My own bird of paradise!.
For one so sweet and innocent
To arouse me from my death!
You show'r me with "forget-me-not's"
And whisper in baby's breath!.
A rose sun blossoms in the sky,
The start of a new story!.
It feels so good to be alive,
Thanks to my morning glory!
-swoosh
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Very well done, great flow!. So did you work at a nursery in your younger days!? If I counted right, 8 varieties!. Nice line: and whisper in baby's breath!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is so very graceful, endearing and well written!. I love the imagery of lovely blossoms!. So beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As flowery as an English garden, I could smell the fragrance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"You uprooted me with peace"---what a marvelous image!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like somebody gave Wood a Swooshie!.!.!.I mean!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
awesomeeee :]
you should do my poetry project for me =] Just kidding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great poem!. I would not change anything about it!. Good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com
Oh dear, it's lovely!. And the question!.!.!.!. How could anyone resist!?Www@QuestionHome@Com