A poem about a girl I met one night. Not typical for me. How is this type of poe

Question: A poem about a girl I met one night!. Not typical for me!. How is this type of poem!.!?

"one night stand"

I thought I saw a rainbow,
sparkling in my mind!.
Colors I had never seen,
I'd taste them if I tried!.

Never met a girl like her,
soul as black as mine!.
I promised not to leave her,
tomorrow I'll be gone!.

These things I do can harm,
in the middle of it all!.
Sooner rather than later,
it's my own damn fault!.

I can be so naive,
yet stronger don't you see!.
With time you learn your lesson,
that real hate follows good-bye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Have anudda stah!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is not a bad poem I have to say although I had the distinct impression that it would make a great song!. I could almost hear the guitar behind it, hehe!. Somehow it didn't really stand up on its own as a poem, but it really would work great as lyrics!.
I have to say that it was weaker towards the end!. The last two stanzas just didn't flow as well as the first two and they wounded more forced - e!.g!. 'yet stronger don't you see'!.
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i loved the first two stanzas but i lost the flow somewhere in the last two stanzas!. i like the whole mood of it and emotion!. well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol!.!.!.!.!.!.I didn't think of the skittles thing until you said that!.
I like your poem!.
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it lot' as it full of true emotions in the real world!.Nicely done as always!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was very colorful and had a lot of meaning to It!. I enjoyed It!.Www@QuestionHome@Com