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Question: My last of the night!. urban in style, but very sad!. Check it out!.!?
"prison, caskets and homeless"
All my tears gone and dried up!.
You've no idea, the way that I feel!.
How can I feel, my bro's are all gone,
In prison, in caskets and homeless!.
I don't need this crap in my life,
I've got enough saving my as*!.
Tryin' not to think, but I think I gotta,
Lost all the time, losin' my mind!.
I got nada to show for all this,
Been in the game, so long it is sick!.
Smoked me a chump when I was sixteen,
Now he's at home, the bottom of a lake!.
I've been O!.G!. since I was still short,
Twenty seven years!.!.!.I'm still here!.
One more year, here the f*ck i come,
Lost by myself in this brave new world!.
We settled things mano y mano,
Now it's drive by and steal a life!.
All of my tears long dried up,
You can't understand the way I feel!.
All my homies are gone,
Prison, caskets and homeless!.
Don't need this it's part of me,
I just can't figure any other way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
don't go back to prison!. don't end up in a casket!. don't become homeless!. all this may be a part of you, but there is hope!. you can't bring your homies back!. don't join them!. keep searching your soul!. the answers will come!. another one bites the dust!. good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm beginning to understand urban - lol!. I'm a quick study!. This is urban sad alright!. I got the message and enjoyed the read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I must admit I am not a fan of urban , but I liked your poem !. I believe it's successful in bringing out the emotion in the reader !. Take care :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don`t give up, I got your back Bro!. I`m hear for ya!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yes nice poem but very sad!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah!.!.!.sad!.!.huh!.!.
thanks I feel sad now!Www@QuestionHome@Com