Something I posted on gspoetry. Now it appears her. How do u like it.?

Question: Something I posted on gspoetry!. Now it appears her!. How do u like it!.!?

"scarlet reign"

The blood always flows,
my only friend!.

Pain I still feel,
deep, dark inside!.

I deserve this,
for each time I cried!.

I am so bright,
with much to learn!.

Each cut I make,
hot angry burns!.

Life is so lonely,
quiet and cold!.

My innocence gone,
bought and then sold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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My own scars testify to how poignantly I relate to your poem!. There is not a word wasted here and the words you do use are powerful and direct!. Beautiful work!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

as i read your poetry i wonder who are you!? are you angry at yourself or at those who inflicted all the hurt on you!. better still will you ever get over it!. i sure hope so!. life is lonely only if you isolate yourself!. yes you do have so much to learn, only about yourself!. enjoyed this also!. good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

EMO!!!!! It's hard for me to judge it when I hate everything emo!. My only advice is the last line does not fit with the rest!. How does cutting yourself relate to your innocence bought and sold! What the hell does that even mean in this context!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is direct and straight forward!. Why the above do not get it, beats me!. Emo is short for emotion!. Isn't that what poetry is all about!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very dark and interesting!.

I have 2 questions!.!.!.

what is gspoetry

and

what do you think of MY poem!?

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Let the emotions flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's brilliant and so dark and i really love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com