A poem about me being lost a 7 years old. Something different for me. Do you lik

Question: A poem about me being lost a 7 years old!. Something different for me!. Do you like it!.!?

"lost"

Lost in hills outlined,
by falsely blueish skies!.
Trapped inside the valleys,
the backdrop for my cries!.

Just a little child,
lost in massive woods!.
I lie down, cry to sleep,
no where else to go!.

Gnomes and plyful rabbits,
marked along my way!.
Led me out of trouble,
they were there, I swear!.

It was a midnight hike,
I never should have went!.
I was only seven,
by eleven i was spent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes! Great!. 'I was only seven, by eleven I was spent' - super strong ending!. It says it all!. This is a keeper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I do like it!.
Dark or not, something your used to or something new for you!. You can do it all, and good too!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really hope you are finding some comfort in writing these poems!. You have my attention from beginning to end!. Do what ever you got to do to go forward!. Remember you have a friend In me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved this poem but it was really sad to read but happy as you got found!.,!., !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.

Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ummm!.!.!.I usually am I fan but this one needs alot of work!.!.!.!.there is no connection for the reader!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liek the first three stanzas!. you probably don't even need the last one!.!.!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com