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Question: A dark poem for a dark evening!. Check it out!.!?
"the craving"
I deeply dream of those,
who are here no more!.
Sweet darkness envelops,
are you there my soul!?
Demons of the darkest realm,
I see you once again!.
Ah, the hanging children,
weeping out in pain!.
In these fiery fields,
lives my blackened soul!.
In his time and patience,
he will rule again!.
Shed a tear of blood,
right upon my coffin!.
Every tiny crimson drop,
brings me back to life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Wow this is lovely and fantastic and it is truly off the hook !.This is one of the best i have seen and i just love it so!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Haunting and horrific and I love it! I love the title as well; it illuminates the poem!. Even though the sun still slants through the window here, I feel a chill as i read this, which appeals to the darker side of my nature!. Thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com
whoa
dude
awesome
gave me shivers
bit creepy!. but pretty awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good!. I like it alot!. It`s pretty cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This Is so dark I need a flashlight to read It!. Love It!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
One of your better ones!.
I like it!.
Thanks for the read!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ooooh, there you are!.!.!.
Darkly done!.!.!.
Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Um, kinda creepy, but cool at the same time! Sounds like a vampire!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh my goodness!. That was really good!. I wish I could write poetry like that!. :PWww@QuestionHome@Com
love it i like keep writing to your dreamsWww@QuestionHome@Com
OMG!! that is like the BEST poem in the entire world!! are you a poet!?!? u should be!! hey this is not a phyco by the way!.!.!.!.!.!.maybe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i ******* love it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com