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Question: It got deleted once!. Will you answer it again!?
DREAMER
I have known
a dream,
and followed it
to its end!.
I have seen
many things!.
I have felt the breath
from the unbeating heart,
I have seen the edge
beyond the space,
across time
into oblivion!.
I have found a heart
that beats
in tandem with mine,
and taken it
to live beside me!.
Before the dawn,
there I stood,
watching, waiting,
creating, believing!.
I have been
the great transfusion,
genius and ignorance,
immortal transience!.
For you see,
I found and end,
and followed it
to my dream!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
DELETED!?!?!? OK, no, I will not get angry and I will not hate!. Your poem is too lovely!. How could anybody want to delete such soothing words!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very powerful with great flow as I read!. Liked your third stanza and "genius and ignorance, immortal transience!." Well done, my compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
!.!.following your dream, a goal, (or a new kitty cat! lol TD Euwaite) will always be different than from what others know!.
(i sure hope its a mouser kitty cat!. hahaha!)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Should the second line of the last stanza be, "I found an end," instead of "I found and end!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your use of language in all its forms and shapes is outstanding!. I am a lover of words and I am in love with your poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I followed that very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Brilliant poem ET and if it is true then that is fantastic for you!. !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful, Eva!. That's all I can say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ooh, I like it!. :D
I didn't see the first one to answer a specific question, but I think it's good!. :0Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's beautiful, but answer it how!? Not sure what you want!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its great!!!!
loved it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You got a new cat!?Www@QuestionHome@Com