Here's a curious one, what do you think?

Question: Here's a curious one, what do you think!?

The Now

In an empty green field
On this marijuana morning
I attempt to coral the sky’s escaped kangaroos
With the sheer force of my mind

Puffy, white, smiling beasts
Sly and mischevious
They frolic once, twice
Then evolve into children, mountains and rolling pins

The sun coats me like honey with its warmth
Its gentle tongue caressing
Softly
Soothing me sleepily

Clocks are uninvented in my altered now
And I bask
And the kangaroos return
Presenting daisies
Aromatic clouds,
My last sight before I slip
Into light dream and perfect present moment…!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If you weren't smoking that killer weed, you would know that "corral" isn't spelled "coral" at all!.
Thanks you recreate the days of my mis-spent youth!. At least I guess so!. If you remember the '60's then you weren't there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have totally hit the spot!. This is fantastic!.

Cannot fault it - many is the times I have lain on my back as a child creating menageries out of the clouds, feeling happy (which was a rare feeling for me as a child)

Some one take this poem and publish it, please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Marijuana Morning, so apt especially since it serves as a great metaphor!. I once saw a horse, indian and bow and arrow daydreaming while driving a tractor!. Then I came to the end of the row and had to turn around! A great poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love cloud watching! (Never saw a Kangaroo, however!.)

Since YA has posted that we may be seeing 'strange things' because of them working (on what I wonder) perhaps we will!.
Miss-quoted!.!.!.it's "odd behavior"!. That's an opening if I ever heard one!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't call something poetry that doesn't have a meter!. Even free verse should have some sort of meter!. But If I remember my days smoking grass, I think it is a very good example of a pot dream!. Ah!.!.!.!.!.!.bring back the 70's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nicely done!. I like it its screens on a paradise and conveys that which is seen and felt I get a warm sense of a sunny day very descriptive and well written!.
With PeaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

The amount of metaphor and feeling you put in is quite amuzing!. It is very interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it ! Overflowing with picture words and sensory experiences!. Read so effortlessly!. A pleasure!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd say!.!.!.{in my opinion} !.!.!.!.!.!.!.""!.Now Here's a Curious One""!.!.!.Would be a GREAT title for your magical poem! OH!!.!. Dream on Baby!!!.!.!.Dream On!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.over and out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT! More of this please man!. YOu could do to psychedelia what I've dont to crap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats good! so creativeWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think u should lay off the LSDWww@QuestionHome@Com