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Position:Home>Poetry> 'Morning Thoughts' What do you think?Question: 'Morning Thoughts' What do you think!? This morning I long for evening
And the sweet release of sleep To journey to the land of dream Populated by uncounted sheep Multi-coloured and faceted Reality rarely does seep Into the land of dream Reached in the deepest sleep!. I revisit in the morning But only through vague memory That lovely world beyond Harsh and solid reality!. I hope to be there again Transported quite magically To the land of dream And indefinable majesty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Do you long for the coming evening or last night's!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The poem is very well said, but I don't share your ideal - I can't wait to get up and launch myself on another lovely day!. I've been retired now just over a a year, and I'm not bored, I'm not lonely, I'm not depressed, I'm not stagnating!.!.!.!.!.!.life is so exciting when you've got all day to just do what you want!. Finding this web page a couple of months ago has been fascinating for me (unfortunately I have jettisoned my Spanish classes because of it!.!.!.I wasn't giving it my full attention) Isn't it annoying not to be able to clearly remember your dreams!? If I am in the middle of one and my husband wakes me, and if I then tell him what I was dreaming they seem to stick around a bit longer!. When I've written a wonderful poem in my sleep and I know I have but it slips away that is annoying!. Still enough about me!. How about Reality rarely manages to seep Into the land of dream!.!.!.!.that flows better I like the idea that uncounted sheep slip into the dream world (are the sheep multi-coloured and faceted!? I hope so - that makes a wonderful image - like a Salvador Dali painting)!. Another suggestion try carrying on some of the lines on the page it stops the jerkiness of the reading!. I found myself stopping at the end of the line !.!.!.!.!.beyond e!.g!. I revisit in the morning (but only through vague memory) That lovely world beyond harsh and solid reality!. I hope to go there again, Transported quite magically to the land of dream and indefinable majesty I hope you don't mind me messing about with your poem!. I wanted help when I used to write lots of poems and I had no-one to ask, so it took me a long time to learn by myself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I would love to just go back to sleep as well!.!.!. sadly we are all off to the Capital today and I will simply have to long for my bed and a wireless Internet so that I may laze around and come here to spend time with you guys in the comfort of my own home!.!.!.!.!. but only in Non-dream-land will it be so!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The two most difficult things for me are waking up in the morning and falling asleep!. The third most difficult thing is not being envious toward one who writes as well as you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I often feel this way!. Yesterday, in fact - lol!. I wonder if others do!. Good Thursday Morning To You!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds like you need a new job!. Poem though, well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow, this really hit home my friend, I'm addicted to my dreams (that's what I write about a lot) This is an excellent poetic version of such <3 Well done @)~>~Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it, i think its really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |