Critique this poem please? i think its shi*?

Question: Critique this poem please!? i think its shi*!?

i cant control the sound of water
pretending i'm not alone
i cant turn of the faucets

i'm awake but
theres no one home

the state im in is farther than the west
it goes past portland
it goes past this bed

euphoria
laid at peace
its hectic silence
the saddest sweet

i feel your skin
not a breathe mutter for miles
if i could stop breathing
my very own denialWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!.!.!. seems like a person that goes from happy to sad and back again!? It describes someone that is Bipolar, like myself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'm not being bad!.!.but i think it's not good!.!.i don't get the point!.!.sorry!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com