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Question: Opinions on this poem!? no one really understands it!?
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genius put into words inked onto paper thrusted upon my mind
pricing a sin
unappreciated
its incredible how your words speak
they illusionize and they teach
you saw the forthcome
predicted the future
you broke down society
ripped out the sutures
money can't buy
oil dribbling off a fat man's chin
no genius can afford
now in the under ten bin
an atrocity at least
masterpeice not at its best
the information a caution
of who's importance can not be stressed
its an ode to george orwell's 1984Www@QuestionHome@Com
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The poem is challenging the hunt for the "almighty dollar"!
It's absolutely beautiful and complete genius!
"Money can't buy, oil dribbling off a fat man's chin, no genius can afford now, in the under 10 bin"
It's very expressive, with great word choice and great natural pauses!.
I really like it!
It reminds me of the early 1900's when America was fighting slums, workers rights, trusts, and monopolies; where men like Carnegie and Rockefeller and H!.P!. Morgan took over American industry!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i understood at once- the presumption of those in the spotlight , the power-seats, whatever you name them as, to tell everyone else what genius and art and beauty are composed of in order to sell us all out to a strict protocol of idiom and ideal: Orwell style; new world order slavery!!!
i abhor that insidious medium of controlling us- good for you, i love your styleWww@QuestionHome@Com
It could possibly be metaphorically decribing the way that Orwell portrayed society in his novel!. Although we don't live in the actual world Orwell described, there are plenty of undertones of his book in present day society!. In a nutshell, I think it's saying Orwell was ahead of his time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its just describing Orwell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com