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Question: Neonman caused me to remember this one - Do you like!?
The boy looks forward with wonder
Taking his mother's hand
Together they stand
Facing the unknown together

Time continues to pass in tense
The young man reaches further
Looking into the eyes of his mother
He stands tall with confidence

The man has grown wise and handsome
Stepping out into the unknown
Self-assured on his own
His mother steps back, but watches over himWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Great memory and a lovely poem!. Glad I was your muse for memory!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very poignant, very moving!. It reminds me of my son and me, as we have been through a lot and "faced the unknown together"!. I suppose it is very true that I will always watch over him!. Your poem is written with concise clarity which serves to strengthen this message!. It is beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm puzzled by the line
Time continues to pass in tense!.!.!.!.!.!.!?

Yes, this is a simple, clear poem that any mother could relate to!. Grown up children don't realise it, but that is what you always do and will do until the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what a great poem and it so reminds me of my nephew who i am raising as my son!.I am here for him no matter what as long as i have my last breath in me!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good quick though could you have written more or is that the point that we grow up quickly and loss the earthly parents only to find they watch us from above I would love to know send me an email please!.
With PeaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great, life's story!. I have lived it and I have watched happen over and over again!. Memories are always good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would have made a wonderful mother!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com