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okay we need a title too!

here it is:

I stare out into the clam ocean!.
The flaming sun, setting on the horizen!.
The warm breeze brushes accross my face!.
The sun, Silently melting into the water!.
Its reflection glistens!.
small frogs hop on lillies!.
Sending out ripples!.
palm trees, dancing in the breeze!.
blue and purple skys all around!.
I shut my eyes!.
And listen!.
until I hear nothing!.
Nothing but the cool wind whispering in my ear!.
I open my eyes!.
the sky,
Blue as black!.
stars all around!.
Silent as death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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