I have a poem? please rate its not very good tho?

Question: I have a poem!? please rate its not very good tho!?

not very good but please rate anyway :(

1-10 1 as the worst please!?

action
put on the show
leave the real drama
behind the silver screen
put on the fake smile
the make up the hair
and start rolling

cut
end scene
leave the set
come in to me
make up the madness
take up the handles
and start up fameWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

hello invisible
action part paragraph
means let the show rolling

cut part paragraph
is referred to lets not end the show
stay with you

I find this poem written okay
if this your first don't be hard on yourself!.
I will rate this as a 10
because you put in much effort in it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10/10 your cute whats your msn!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm a bit confused by the final 3 lines but I do like it very much!.

EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to rate it - I'd give it 8 out of 10!. Keep writing!.

EDIT: Speaking of poetry, damorg95 rhymes with banker!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

-7
It sucks
go kill yourselfWww@QuestionHome@Com