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Question: Any comments or critiques of this lighthearted poem!?
Slowing Down
After updating the music on my IPOD,
Burning a music CD, scanning a receipt,
Writing a new poem; posting it,
Making an entry in my blog,
Checking my three mailrooms,
Working new pictures in photoshop,
Paying a few bills online and booking
Reservations for my next vacation,
I will contemplate and worry
That as I grow older;
I seem to be ‘slowing down’
And can’t seem to multi-task anymore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A yes, old age!. It slows women down to only 100 things done at a time!. Try push ups!. They get the blood flowing again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Aha yes we do at times beat our selves up, neaty done,
daily routine of what is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice use of irony!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What's an ipod!? CD!? You mean 8 track don't you!? I am confused!. Now where was I!.!.!.!?
Nice sentiment, well placed in record speed no doubt while conversing with your bluetooth implant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com