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Question: Do you think my poem is good!?
It's not my best one,But I would like to see what your thoughs are about it!.!.!.It's not the deepest one and I know its not that well!.Im 13 years old and I really love poems!.
I don't know you,
I thought I did,
But maybe all this
Has gone to my head!.
The pain is different
much more real
helps me know
I can feel!.
Im going numb,
I want you here
But your not here!.
I always take
the ******* blame!.
Your not you,
Or at least who I knew
Please tell me!.!.!.
What happen to you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its great!.!.!.i like it !.!.!.a lot!.!.!.!.!.
by the way did u go through some kind of emotional trauma like lost your best friend/boyfriend or some old friend betrayed you or anything!?!?!.!.!.!.!.just curious!.!.!.!.!.
its really good!.!.!.!.keep it up :)
by the way !.!.!.!.inthe last line it should be "what happened to you"!.!.!. :)
good luck :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
simple, but yeah
im 13 tooWww@QuestionHome@Com
IT'S NICE!!Www@QuestionHome@Com