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FREEZING RAIN

They told me
that it was
natural,
that everyone,
did it!.
They never saw
the freezing rain!.

They said,
it's all right,
it never hurt
anyone!.!.!.too much!.
They've never heard
of freezing rain!.

They smiled and
watched me
sail away,
they said,
"now she'll be fine!."
They've never felt
the freezing rain!.

For when I left them
and was with you,
I took your hand in mine,
and we walked together!.!.!.
until I let it go,
sure that my mind,
knew what was best!.

I let you slip away,
walk away,
fade away!.!.!.
leaving me in
freezing rain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Oh my! Tell me my dear did you truly lose a friend through space or time!? Do you need a towel to dry off !? If you want I could give you a towel made of fluffy love dove!.!.!.My goodness!.!.I've been away for far too long!.!.I've missed you!.!.Have you missed me for more than my comment on your poetry!? Ha ha sorry I had to do it!.!.It rhymed!.!.I know that my only purpose in your life is to validate your existence!.!.Ha that sounds funny! As if I have a purpose XDWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMB!!! That is awesome!!! so deep :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed reading it, and got the most awesome sense of sadness in the last 2 lines!. It is beautiful, and I'm sure if I were female, I'd be in tears about now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now, even thought you wear that black hat!.!.!.I've a feeling you can (and probably do!.!.!.I hope) shed tears!.!.!.over such as this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Liked it!. I feel the sense of taste is getting short shrift however!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well said!. To me, listening to advice but not your heart!. Freezing rain metaphor kept reinforcing this heartache!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a lovely poem!.
Great imagery!.
Very nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

like looking at new garden to till
after i ate the other one!.!.!.lol!.!.
but i like your version!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Brutal! Many people are impervious to pain!.!.!.!.!.!.as long as it's someone else's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The "freezing rain" metaphor is so apt!. The poem contains a message all of us can relate to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Totally awesome imagery, loved the repetitiveness also!

Eerily sad <3Www@QuestionHome@Com