A poem about my trip out of the black. do you like.?

Question: A poem about my trip out of the black!. do you like!.!?

"never say never"

I closed the door,
to the world below!.
Demons sleep,
while evil grows!.
They enter from
the world beyond!.
When nightime falls,
shadows grow long!.
The signs of evil,
brings forth the night!.
They come for YOU,
haunting your dreams!.
Around the centopath,
candles alight!.
I closed the door,
but not very tight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If the demons are sleeping - where is the evil issuing from!?
How about
When demons awaken
evil grows!.

Centopath!?!?!?!? Is that like a Cenotaph

I closed the door to the world below!.
When demons awaken evil grows!.
They enter from the world beyond!.
When night time falls, shadows grow long!.
The signs of evil bring forth the night!.
They come for You, haunting your dreams!.
Around the centopath(!?) candles alight!.
I closed the door, but not very tight!.

I like this very much - this is a real poem
especially as it leaves that question at the end!. Why should the writer want to let the demons enter - what kind of person is he!? Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It has potential, but needs some editing!. Your abcb pattern is okay, but you lose it at "dreams" because the reader was looking for a word that rhymed with "night"!. I especially like the ending though!.!.!.good twist and sense of humor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good ! I liked this a lot , perhaps "sight" instead of "dreams" keeps the rhyme going !. Very nice ending :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was scary!. But since you left the door closed but not very tight, I felt safe knowing you were there!. Very light and very dark at the same time!. I guess that would be gray!. I
enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it! the title is great too! this goes in my "favorites by bathory" file!.

scared me for a second there with that "out of the black" stuff!.
i know i will always leave that door at least unlocked!.

i've never heard "centopath" before!. tell me about it sometimeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Needs work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm hiding under the blanket !.!.!. ohh!. I hope the door is an escape route!. Very enjoyable poem!. Makes me think of things that go bump in the night!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, I think I need to install a lock!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one!.
The only thing I can see is where you stopped the rhyme on a few lines!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

every body's a critic!. welcome back!. good insight!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved da "CrEePy" in this, nicely dome my friend *^_^*Www@QuestionHome@Com