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Question: A request for my little boy What do you think!?
Beautiful Shimmering
Diamonds
Glimmering Bright
Stars Night
Dancing Prancing
Whoosh
Seagulls Clacking
Castles falling
Kids laughingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Cami, I'm going to pray for u!.
I love a sweet poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is beutifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's alright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
what are you asking!?!? Its very sweet how old is your little boy!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would like to get some sleep now !.!.!. Oh how addictive this poetry hobby is !. I liked the images your poem produced , very descriptive !. But I think I'll go to bed now , it's almost 5!.30 AM :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it!
Tell him some mad crow called Sarah is now a fan of his work! Aww, such a lovely opening line, "Beautiful Shimmering Diamonds"
He's going to be a charmer, he can see diamonds are a girls best friend lol
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Yeah how old is he!?
EDIT OF THE EDIT lol
I see now he's 10 :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
This Is wonderful,you are wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
that's beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
Very upbeat and visual!. I'm sure he loved this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm glad that you're mother enough to give up the style you love for your son!. I also like this sort of style!. Simplistic, nice, with sweet imagery!. It leaves you with a lingering taste in your mouth!. Sweet, but in a melancholy way, like chocolate that has faded!. Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Quite nice to read!. Do it again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What a brilliant young man! You ain't so bad yourself kid!Www@QuestionHome@Com
He is light, he is your soul, he is your laughter!. How can you not respond!? Well put!. For everything dark, there has to be light!. He wants you to show him the light!. How can you not!? For you penning this tells me that he has a special Mom!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
He is lucky of being your son!.Www@QuestionHome@Com