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Question: How do you spell Fada Bing!?
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Martian Scout Camp
9-11-3001

On a day marked similar to this
Back there, on the planet what used to be blue
From the sky came crashing
Warriors of Allah
Down on the Train Center of the World
The war-call was Icelandic Guy Had
The green was golden, and trains had it all
So they crashed bashing boom

Then A’murkah, with tankers and truckers
Took the trains over and bagged old Dad
And glad they were, to be Godly

Then the storm clouds came and the rain
Quake shakers rock rolled ‘em
As the books had foretold they would swim
N’ork and Fra’zizco underwater went
And God sent them the frogs again
But they kept on sinnin’
War winnin’

So today, on Mars, we remembers
The fighting and terrible enders
The flaggens gone wavin’
And children depraving
Swept way by the devlin’
We remeberin’

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's really a well written piece TD!.!.!.while sitting silent on our new planet, there will the remembrances of a whole lot of incidents hauntung us still!.!.!.and when we look from mars, earth may seem as red as our own new planet!.!.!.!.!.!.red with human blood!.!.!.the violence will continue as long as human passions are mad!.!.!.and ambitions itch men aimlessly to horrors!Www@QuestionHome@Com

War and destruction result in ignorance, as your last stanza indicates!. Now, please, TD, bite your pen; the only type of war we'll have on Mars will be with the sand during a sandstorm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice and a little scary!.!.!.The voice is fun and kinda Mad Maxish!. At least the Martian scout camp didn't end up like "Lord of the flies" Very creative!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The motto, 'never again' is fitting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so flippin' brilliant I am at a loss for words!.!.!.!.no only kidding!.

I remeberin Star Trek when they found a planet using an old book as their bible, and gradually you realise the words they were using were corruptions of English words!. Don't know who wrote the screen play, but it was an interesting idea!.

Word of mouth changing stories through the generations is an interesting thing to consider - especially when many religions are based on such things!. I'm saying no more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.Interesting!.

We are indeed a species that thrives on war!. War will always follow us and we will incite war wherever we go!. Especially us A’murkahns!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now I know something of how Chaucer would feel reading modern english!. Me like!. Only one criticism from this N'orker - your poem may be too optimistic - the way humans are not progressing and/or not learning from our mistakes, we may be lucky if any life survives, on Mars or anywhere else!. Sigh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like what the Martian Chronicles, new "martians' may have become!.!.!.!.so sci-fi is added to your list of talents!
There is noe end to these, is there!.!.!.!.don't be embarrassed! The more talents the merrier!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, this is new to me!. I hope Mars stays peaceful moreso then earth!. I rather like Mars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com