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Question: Poem - Cold rain and snow!.!.!. opinions!? thoughts!?
Staring out to the cold rain and snow
I wonder sometimes
Proverbially,
Is this the only world I have come to know!?
Blissfulness builds as petals open,
But the truth to that story,
Is that fate has already been written,
Sealed, unsealed,
And spoken!.
And there they go!.
Petals drifting away,
Out, to the cold rain and snow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Winter will always eventually come and destroy summer!. The only truth is that all things are subject to change!. Your poem illustrates this beautifully!. And while it seems that all things glorious fade, the truth is that they will return, perhaps on a fickle wind, or perhaps by sheer dint of power!. Thank you for this beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is very deep--makes one think!.I enjoyed it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it but what has fate writtenWww@QuestionHome@Com
Cold Rain and Snow Poem:
With the rain and snow
this becomes ice
as it will show!.
There can be vehicles accidents
please drive slow and careful
falls are also an bad incident
Public transportation will be late
along with other people
which is not greatWww@QuestionHome@Com
Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I actually liked it,
very nice,
I know your a great poet by your poetry and i know good poetry when i see (read) it!! :)
I give it a 9 out of 10!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com