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Question: Inspired by Silver Bells I've written a poem; do you like it!?
The Bells Are Ringing
Silver bells in crescendo ring,
Ting-a-ling, ting-a-ling,
We poets in our domes all hear
The time to meet is drawing near!.
We each leave our private home
To meet in our communcal dome,
Here we share our poetry,
Argue about meter and symmetry!.
Bills and coins are not exchanged,
We have left a planet grown deranged,
We hear with joy our Silver Bells,
For we have left the Earthers to their hells!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I don't know, I think you've invented a new word!. Communical domes!.!.!.I like that, where we all congregate and communicate!. Very interesting!. Yes, I find the longer I am away from Earth, the less and less I seem to miss it!. I'm just so glad to be on the red planet with all of these wonderful people!. Alas, I must depart, I hear the bells ringing a different song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Marvelous!. You've captured the spirit!.!.!.now, please, let it go again so the others can try!.!.!.heheheWww@QuestionHome@Com
FRIGGIN SWWEEEET! REAALLY!!! and u should make dis da best answerWww@QuestionHome@Com
Is this our future!? Is this the after life I know Is waiting for me!?
If so, then I`ll see you there!. I am ready!. I hope you are a good roommate!. Great poem too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lovely, Elaine - I don't know Silver Bells - I've just read his four short poems to-day that is all!.
You are very prolific - are you chained to your computer and locked in a high tower like Rapunzel!?
It is a wonderful effort, I hope he (she!?) likes it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I hear the Silver Bells!. What a lovely sound, beckoning us all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!.!.!.that's positively fabulous!. It makes me wish it were possible, but I will be there in my dreams!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I loved it Elaine!.!.!.!.i close my eyes!.!.!.and then its silence within the mind!.!.!.and soon, the spirit rises to what we call the height of sublime!.!.!.sailing behind the clouds, observing the dew drops, veiled in the mist!.!.!.!.the spirit walks and triumps over what could be called as the 'height of imagination'!.!.!.!.then it's all music!.!.!.the trasparent, thin, blue elements of the heaven, the golden stars, the juicy white moon!.!.!.aye! the silver bells are ringing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have secured joy with this one!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!. I really enjoyed the sound effects of the bells, as well as the joy at reciting and talking of poetry to poets in the 'communical' communal dome!. TD to make us laugh, Dark Prince to make us cry, Silver bells to give us inspiration, and Elaine to give us pure pleasure reading her verses!. I like this one, but then maybe I am reading more into it than is really there, but maybe not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Damn you! lol I am going to be singing Silver Bells all evening!. I best prepare!. A bottle of French wine, oui!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow,
Very very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com