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Do you write of self harm!?
And bleed your emotions
On to the page,
In tales of rap and abuse
Of how you were torn,
Are you dead on the
Inside unable to love,
Or be loved, do you
Relive your pain in poetry!?
Pen, paper, pain
Over and over
Thoughts get
Deeper, darker, more profane,
Are you insane!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i loved it! i can truly relate to this!. You have a real gift and should continue to write for us!.!.!.!.you know when and where to start a new line and how to make the reader really think about what your trying to get through!.!.!.!.!.!.Great Job!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

ok weirdo!.!.!.!. dont like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. I thought it was great!. It is very inspirational!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i luv it!.!.!. have any more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. this poemis really dark but good at the same time i really like it this a great poem great job =]]Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that you have talent!. I think that your poem is vivid and powerful and expresses a disapproval of rap "music"!. That is the opinion of the poet and the poet's opinion to give!. I do not like rap music, and feel that it has made the black community feel that anger and violence against women and authority is ok!. It also glorifies profanity!. If someone is expressing his pain through, rap, it does many times make that pain deeper and darker instead of alleviating it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.!. this is good!.!.!.!.I have a friend who has to write poetry to get out all her pain!.!.!.!.but still she lives in it every day!.!.!.!.and so I would have to say she does feel insane!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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